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Unread 11-12-2022, 03:34 PM
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I have four erasure poems and a spotlight interview up at Sequestrum, which is a journal I like reading. They're quite analogue, but if you like anxious starfish and blurry sketches they might work.

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Unread 11-12-2022, 05:58 PM
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Congratulations, Sarah-Jane!
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Sarah, I absolutely LOVE these! They’re wonderful and refreshingly full of depth. Congrats, kudos, but most of all thanks for sharing them
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Congratulations, Sarah-Jane
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Lovely ordering of chaos!
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Thank you Alex, Siham, John and Ralph,

They were from ages ago, and I fell in love with the dead Victorian naturalist voice so were tricky to erase, with a lot of editing to get them to work, so I am really happy that you like them,

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Sarah-Jane, I love that last one especially. An aquaeous winter! Exposure of the throat! It just works, particularly with the colours you've used.
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Sarah-Jane,
Like Christine, I especially enjoyed the last one.

In the penultimate one, the 2nd "of" threw me; I think it's extraneous (unless you can convince me otherwise, of course! ).

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