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Me and my shadow!

My entropic brain wins again! (sent it to myself!!!)

https://autumnskypoetrydaily.com/202...ralph-la-rosa/
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I love the way the images move, from crisp to amoebic to the more metaphysical closeness - the hug of the shadow/soul.

Looking forward very much to reading your book when it is out.

Also - not important but the link you used didn't work for me, so here's one that did work for me in case anyone else has an issue -

https://autumnskypoetrydaily.com/202...ralph-la-rosa/
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Thanks for the catch! Sarah-Jane. It will be a small book, about 20 on Thoreau.
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A very nice poem, Ralph. I remember it in D & A. Congratulations!

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Nice one, Ralph.

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Congrats Ralph! Nice one. Good to see this in my Facebook feed.

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Congrats, Ralph! An engaging poem.
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Thanks to all! A liitle bit of August luck spills over.
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Congratulations, Ralph
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