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Unread 07-08-2021, 01:04 AM
John Isbell John Isbell is offline
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Hi Susan,

Back just to suggest ultra-strong. It may be tonally better, and the Ultras were conservative French nobles 1815-1830ish.

Cheers,
John
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Unread 07-08-2021, 01:24 AM
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John, that sounds good.

Susan
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Unread 07-10-2021, 07:31 PM
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Default Susan McLean - Rilke - Parks

Dear Susan,

Once again, I'm impressed with your translation, and applauding the addition of 'manor' to qualify parks in the first line!

I shall return to read a few more times.

Wow!
~mignon

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