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Unread 11-02-2022, 10:01 AM
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Default Autumn Sky

My villanelle "Where we put our mother" which I work-shopped here a couple of weeks ago is in today's Autumn Sky.
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Unread 11-02-2022, 11:41 AM
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Bravo! Excellent work.
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Unread 11-02-2022, 12:02 PM
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Yes, well done. My favorite L5 alone merits publication, not to mention the rest.
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Unread 11-02-2022, 12:12 PM
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I'm glad to see it find an appreciative audience.

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Great. Well done, Joe. I really like that one.

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Good one. I like that it builds a strong narrative instead of going in a circle.
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Oh, I remember this one! Congrats on its publication
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Oh, YES!!!
Congratulations, Joe. I really loved this one. On your original thread I wrote that I was "blown away" by the poem. Now I see that you cleverly changed "disease" to "dis-ease". OMG - I'm blown away even more. That's inspired!

Well done. In ****ing spades!

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Thanks guys, and thanks especially to Jayne for liking the hyphen!
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Thanks guys, and thanks especially to Jayne for liking the hyphen!
Never have I liked a hyphen more, Joe!

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