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Unread 10-13-2021, 09:24 AM
Andrew Frisardi Andrew Frisardi is offline
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My poem "Word" appears in the current issue of Modern Age. It went through the workshop here on the Sphere a little over a year ago, so thanks to the Sphereans who helped me put the finishing touches on this one.
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Andrew, in my midwestern US dialect, I say this is prEtty gOOd, emphasis and intonation supplying the unspoken “very”. Some subtle stuff here. I think I might have written something rather like this. I like this. Yes, I might. As they used to say in the schools in NYC, “word up!”
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Congrats, Andrew! I enjoyed that.
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I loved this quirky yet poignant meditation when you workshopped it, and I'm glad to see it find such a good home, Andrew.
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