[John Riley]

My short essay is up at Better Than Starbucks

https://betterthanstarbucks.wixsite..../from-the-mind

[Jim Moonan]

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Superb.

The essay approaches being prose poetry in and of itself. You could very well flesh it out to be a three credit post-graduate course in poetry mediums.

A "closing argument" imo. Well done.


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[Sarah-Jane Crowson]

Oooh, cool. I agree with Jim. I do love short-form essays, particularly ones that I learn things from reading. I'd heard of Reverdy from my reading on the surrealists, but don't know his work well. I like what you say at the end about line-breaks forward-driving narratives, too.

Sarah-Jane

[R. Nemo Hill]

Nice, John!
I adore Reverdy.

Nemo

[John Riley]

Thanks for reading to each of you. It was fun to write.