Definitely not satanic; after all presuming satan exists, he's certainly aware of God whose punishment he feels all the time. (But Boethius' Philosophy might have a stern word for you.
More to the main, this is pretty Steven Crane-like, don't you think?
Personally, I don't pray as much as I probably should. For me prayers are often questions about whether or not to do something. If God answers, "Yes", I usually chicken out. If God answers, "No", then I usually get pissed off and do it anyway. And worst of all is if God answers, "Wait..."
Poetically, have you ever considered riffing off of each of the lines and extending it?