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Unread 04-24-2005, 10:08 AM
Diana B Diana B is offline
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There is so much to see or find in this lovely piece of artwork. It is an inspiration.
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Unread 04-24-2005, 06:53 PM
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Good grief. They are some sort of fowl. Geese, ducks, whatever. I saw something completely different.

Oh well.
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Unread 05-02-2005, 04:50 AM
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Please place my vote for Julie S, who pretty much captured my feelings about this whole _ _ _ _ _ _ affair.
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Unread 05-02-2005, 12:15 PM
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The Vote - we'll go until May14th

If anyone wants to add a title just let me know.
<table>
<tr bgcolor=pink><td>Alexander Grace - Into the West</td><td></td></tr>
<tr><td>Julie Stoner</td><td>|</td></tr>
<tr bgcolor=pink><td>Christy Elizabeth - Into the West</td><td>|</td></tr>
<tr><td>Mark David - INTO THE WEST</td><td></td></tr>
<tr bgcolor=pink><td>Yolanda Cruz</td><td></td></tr>
<tr ><td>Jerry Glenn Hartwig
No Goose from the Gander When Gosling's Around</td><td></td></tr>
<tr bgcolor=pink><td>Seree Zohar</td><td></td></tr>
<tr><td>Michael Cantor</td><td></td></tr>
<tr bgcolor=pink><td>Diana B - INTO THE WEST</td><td>| | |</td></tr>
<tr><td>Robt_Ward</td><td>| |</td></tr>
<tr bgcolor=pink><td>Svein Olav Nyberg - Ducks in the Mist</td><td></td></tr>
<tr><td>Henry Quince - Perch Rill</td><td>| | |</td></tr>
</table>
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Unread 05-03-2005, 07:27 AM
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I'm voting for Diana's, since, as I said, it captures best the mood and theme of what I was trying to do. I think she understood.

Difficult choice, they're all so good!
Henry gets my vote for second place.

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Unread 05-03-2005, 07:51 AM
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I keep coming back to Robt's, so I vote for his - as an ekphrasis, it captures something for me, since the water is made up of the same colors as what's afloat.

Jerry's was funny! Julie & Seree's, too. Henry's reminded me of the Hut-Sut Song (Hut-Sut Brawlson on the rillerah and a brawla, brawla suet.)which I hadn't thought of in a LONG time! They were all good.

Christy
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Unread 05-04-2005, 04:59 PM
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A vote from me for Christy’s — for its economy and good construction. Both boats and waterfowl in the phrase “junk flock of geese” and the 234, 432 meter suggests the motion of waves.

Btw, Christy, I’ve never heard of the Hut-Sut Song! My effort was riffing on Fern Hill, Dylan Thomas’s rhapsody of youth.

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Unread 05-05-2005, 12:09 AM
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My first vote goes to Henry for his lilting diction and my second to Robert for his infinite melancholy.
Janet
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Unread 05-05-2005, 01:17 AM
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Please include my vote for Robt's poem.

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Unread 05-05-2005, 09:34 AM
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My vote goes to Diana B. Second place to Henry Q.
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