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Unread 04-27-2021, 11:37 AM
Julie Steiner Julie Steiner is offline
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Interesting observations, Ralph. Thanks for this. A wee typo here:

     —and a surprise in stanza 3: Rising/Sun.

This should be

     —and a surprise in stanza 3: Ring/Sun.
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