Yes, thanks, Alex, and thanks, Rachel and Shalom. Like Michael I caught a couple of minor changes, and wondered whether they were deliberate:
"The break is mended" in the reading and "The break is ended" in the written text. "Mended" seems to make more sense in the context.
"In the tall wet grass" in the reading and "in the tall grass" in the written text.
Greatly enjoyed - both the visual effects and the reading. Thanks again.
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