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Unread 09-03-2021, 08:21 PM
Jim Ramsey Jim Ramsey is offline
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Hi John,

This is a nice triptych. Two sounds the most like memoire. One and three make for the best fiction. I'd like the "she" pronoun in One to have a reference. Otherwise. no suggestions.

All the best,
Jim
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