Sarah,
I'm not entirely clear what I'm looking at here, so I'm not entirely sure what I'm being asked to comment on. Is this image all the reader/viewer sees (a series of pages, one behind the other)?. Or is it a book that opens out (or moves in some way) so that you could maybe provide photos of each page / other views? Also are you just asking if we think the concept works and about the overall effect, or do you want critique on individual images / lines?
Sarah and Allen
If a poem or work or art engages me, I really don't mind who or what created it.
Matt
Last edited by Matt Q; 07-23-2022 at 06:32 AM.
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