Hi John,
Well, thanks very much for the appreciation! There are elements I like within the poem; I'm just wondering whether I could make it more dramatic. Chomping is always good, though
Random Schubert is good too. As you know, I've just woken from an hour's sleep and I really ought to go to bed in earnest soon, lol. But my first impressions of your poem are positive. It's interesting that we have different approaches to writing to music. Perhaps we could consider a collaboration at some stage. Do you remember when I channelled a ram-god on one of your ekphrastic pieces? That was fun
Best wishes,
Fliss