Hi, Susan—
My wife and I have often reflected on how much trickier it is to parent grown children than babies. I like how you focus on the turmoil from the empty nester parents’ viewpoint.
The cover title threw me. I was expecting a more direct reference to Exodus and the Passover story. I wonder if this parallel could be developed a bit more. There is a definite Oedipal theme in the Bible story, especially in the Golden Calf episode and the Giving of the Law.
The only tiny nit is the meter is L2.
Nice work.
Glenn
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