Thread: Doves in the Lot
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Unread 04-13-2025, 12:20 PM
Susan McLean Susan McLean is offline
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Sam, the meter feels a bit off in L7. It could be read with just four beats: Or RICE to home IN on like SAble DARTS? Would you consider something like "hurtle toward" in place of "home in on"?

Susan
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