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Unread 01-23-2025, 08:22 AM
Richard G Richard G is offline
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Hi Jim.

I achieved a certain infamy

Gotta admire a man that blows his own trumpet.

I am ashamed I haven't Googled Rossetti yet but I will.
It's "In the bleak mid-winter"

As to S3, I feel I need a couple particulars of her story.
Then perhaps have it follow the "But just one more" verse as it's currently interrupting the set-up?

She has thirty seven shotgun pellets embedded in her as confirmed by X-rays.
But what does it have to do with the dog, the narrator, and the baggies?

in heed of need of dress
- alternatively, before the chore of dress ?

“But just one more,” reply I, begging mildly.
- a little tortured, no?

hydrant/silent
- better, though still noticeably weaker than the other A rhymes.
I like the codes/mode/odes but struggle to see what that last one has to do with detective mode.

Objection to leash's end withdrawn.

Still no wiser on (new) S6/L3


RG.
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