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Unread 08-07-2024, 10:41 AM
Martin Elster Martin Elster is offline
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Congrats, Christine! Being buoyant and weightless in water is so much more enjoyable than fighting against Earth's gravity on a piano bench. The last couplet made me feel refreshed and happy. I love "Her arms were cranes / in flight, her back a pillar rising from / the sea." If you don't have the ocean, you may as well learn to swim the way Grandma did.
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