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Unread 04-14-2024, 12:03 PM
John Riley John Riley is offline
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I just saw this. I am beginning to be convinced I’m best when I’m not worrying about line endings, much less meter. I’m certainly not saying this applies to you. That is your decision. I am saying this is the best thing of yours that I’ve read and Jim’s revision makes it better. Thanks.
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