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03-06-2024, 05:48 AM
Joe Crocker
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This reads beautifully. The rhymes and enjambments are delightful, surprising and satisfying. I don’t understand much of it but there is so much going on here. The bits I do follow keep calling me back for more.
You may have missed an “a” in S5L1.
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