I'm curious (more than suggesting) as to what would happen if the last two lines were switched around. The images come in a savage flurry. It is the same with Plath's moor poem. There is a kind of beastial, almost deranged, energy. — "Pow" indeed!
Hope this helps.
Last edited by W T Clark; 02-07-2024 at 10:13 AM.
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