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Unread 08-16-2023, 10:48 PM
Michael Cantor Michael Cantor is offline
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Chris - neat, but I'd prefer it if it was pared to S1, S4 and S5. And S5 by itself is wonderful for a shorter critique, and you don't have to go through as many lines to get to the all-important "Fuck you".

Last edited by Michael Cantor; 08-16-2023 at 11:14 PM.
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