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Ah no, John and Ann, it's the first line of a prize-winning entry in the 'Wrong Kind of Apple' comp by F.M., He-Who-Must-Not-Be Named.
Well-spotted, Jerome! What the hell are they playing at; this page is a right mess. All I do is copy it - faithfully - but as I was typing it out my first thought was that Katie Mallett would surely have punctuated her poem better than this?

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Also, Line 12 of Paul Elmhirst's evocative piece needs reuniting with its Stanza 3.
Same thing... it's how it appears in the magazine, and though I thought 'Huh?' I had no option but to write it as it appears.

Perhaps someone on The Oldie team was slightly inebriated.

Jayne
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