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Summer Fun — 7/15 Deadline
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Your challenge: Write a poem in any form, somehow inspired by that line, and post it to this thread. Enter as many times as you like. You may edit your entries until the entry deadline (noon Eastern Daylight Time, 7/15/2025). Judging: After the entries close, I'll post a Google form that will allow currently-active Eratosphere members to vote for their favorites. Depending on the quality of the entries, I might also send a group of my own favorites (anonymized) to a celebrity judge. Prizes: Undying glory, of course. Also, your choice from among five poetry books that I've accumulated, mailed to you at my expense. [Additional research:] Quote:
Modern Italian dictionary entries: chieggio = archaic first person singular of chiedere, to ask, request, beg mercede = wage, salary (archaic usages: recompense, recognition, prize, pity, mercy, grace) chiedo scusa, chiedo perdone = (modern Italian) I ask forgiveness, I beg (your) pardon e = and sono = I am alpestro = Alpine (masculine adjective) tigre = tiger (masculine noun) Maybe "I ask forgiveness" is an inaccurate translation, and she actually wrote "I request recognition that I am a mountain tiger." However, "that" would have been che rather than e, and e elides nicely with the final syllable of merzede to form a standard hendecasyllabic (eleven-syllable) line, while che does not. Hmmm. Anyway, it's your call, poets. Possibly relevant: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/European_wildcat |
Kitty Kitty
Julie, a shot in the dark. . .
Here, Kitty Kitty After a line by Ginevra de'Benci With smiles, you called me your sweet Kitty and hoped that it would make me purr. You swore you had a rhyming cure; proven soothing care, not pity. It’s true that I was feeling chilly. But your persistence seemed a spur to rouse my fight response, to lure me even closer and to bed me. Forgive me, Tony, that it was rainy, frosty weather! Under it, ice flakes on my hair, eyes runny, I growled and threw a hissy fit: I’m a tiger, not a house cat, so sack the formal poetry scat! |
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