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Andrew Frisardi 10-13-2021 09:24 AM

Word in Modern Age
 
My poem "Word" appears in the current issue of Modern Age. It went through the workshop here on the Sphere a little over a year ago, so thanks to the Sphereans who helped me put the finishing touches on this one.

Allen Tice 10-13-2021 04:19 PM

Andrew, in my midwestern US dialect, I say this is prEtty gOOd, emphasis and intonation supplying the unspoken “very”. Some subtle stuff here. I think I might have written something rather like this. I like this. Yes, I might. As they used to say in the schools in NYC, “word up!”
Allen

Martin Elster 10-13-2021 08:14 PM

Congrats, Andrew! I enjoyed that.

Julie Steiner 10-14-2021 09:41 AM

I loved this quirky yet poignant meditation when you workshopped it, and I'm glad to see it find such a good home, Andrew.


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