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How to Write a Sestina
By eHow Education Editor http://www.ehow.com/how_16712_write-sestina.html A traditional poetic form created by Arnaut Daniel, the sestina is made up of six six-line stanzas and a final three-line envoi. Written in iambic pentameter, the sestina is unique in that the poet is required to end each line using a set pattern of the same six words. Instructions Things You’ll Need: Dictionaries Thesauri Step 1: Consider the subject matter that you wish to write about. Think about words related to your subject that you could use several times throughout your poem. Step 2: Write your first stanza (and those that follow) using iambic pentameter. The words that end each line in this stanza (identified as 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6) will determine the words that end every stanza in your sestina. Step 3: Add a second stanza using those words in a 6, 1, 5, 2, 4, 3 order. If you do this correctly, the word used to end the first line of this stanza should be the same one you used in the sixth line of the previous stanza. The second should match the first, and so on. Step 4: Write a third stanza using a 3, 6, 4, 1, 2, 5 pattern, followed by a fourth stanza with a 5, 3, 2, 6, 1, 4 pattern. Stanza five should use a 4, 5, 1, 3, 6, 2 pattern, and stanza six should employ a 2, 4, 6, 5, 3, 1 pattern. Step 5: Draft a seventh stanza that is three lines in length, using all six ending words in the following places. Your ending words used in the second, fourth and sixth lines must be used halfway through the lines of this stanza. The fifth, third and first ending words of the first stanza are used to end the lines of this stanza, in that order. Step 6: Revise as needed. |
My First Sestina
(I tried one another time and broke the rules because I'd failed to read them properly) I would love to see others posted here for the exercise. _______________________________________ Two people stood atop a distant hill. I saw them as I left today from work, as soon as I had shut the wooden gate behind me and had chugged a drink of water. There was no place I really had to go, and so I took my time. I didn’t run the way I sometimes do – I often run as if life were a race. But on that hill the silhouetted couple stood. I go and come the same way every day from work, taking for granted things like sun and water. Familiar things get lost. Sometimes a gate will make me pause and think; a creaking gate especially so, and sounds of things that run, like trickling brooks. There is a voice in water that’s like an echo coming off a hill where heavy clouds laid down their burdensome work, and, like me, found their peace in letting go of weight that binds. The moments come and go as fast as rabbits rushing toward a gate in search of freedom. There is always work enough to keep us feeling on-the-run. The move toward pleasure always seems up hill, against the laws that govern running water. And nothing is alive where there’s no water that's troubled – living things must come and go. Stagnation lies beneath a quiet hill of graves, behind the locking of a gate in wrought iron stillness. Living things must run. An idle body has no line of work to keep its spirit going. Life needs work – and workers need a living well of water to keep the heart from fainting as they run. Recycling seems the only way to go. Yes life’s a circle, and each of us a gate that God has set upon his lovely hill. I bike to work near waterfalls that run. so brisk and full of life, go through the gate and drink the sun-rise lilting on the hill. [This message has been edited by Anne Bryant-Hamon (edited April 17, 2008).] |
Here's my absolute favorite part.
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Things You'll Need:
Dictionaries Thesauri, Trail Mix, Thermal Underwear, Nose Plugs. * (Anyone care to write the next six lines of the sestina?) [This message has been edited by Roger Slater (edited April 17, 2008).] |
Someone (Lewis Turco, perhaps?) correct me if I'm wrong, but aren't Sestina's traditionally syllabic as opposed to iambic pentameter? I mean, jeez, they're hard enough to write as it is without demanding that they also be strictly metered.
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Here ya go, Anne, just to prove I can be a good sport when the mood overtakes me.
February, 1974 Sometimes there's nothing left to do but pack your bags and leave. To stick around would be to court disasterous results. Brown drugs in foil packages lay scattered 'cross the floor. Go elsewhere quickly now - don't wait. It's all your fault. The stage was set by someone else whose cue you should have recognized. This is your cue - the baby's cry, the watching dogs that pack around his crib, protectively, like it's your fault their life is such a mess. He goes to court today, he won't be home. It's time to go - to grab the kid, the dogs, your clothes, and foil his attempts to keep you locked inside. So, do it. Foil him - don't lose your courage now. The broken pool cue in the bedroom says it all. This man can kill. Go far away and change your name. Don't bother packing anything, just leave it all behind. The court won't keep him jailed up tight for long. It's not their fault, the case is weak. If anyone's at fault it might be you. You've been the perfect foil far too long. So scared, so meek and mild. You're courting death if you don't leave. Take one more cue from life before you die that needlessly. Just pack your baby and your dogs and run away. Go - Hurry - steal his keys and take his car. Go find a place that's safe before you die. The fault's your own. You should have left six months ago. Pack the diaper bag with toys and doggie bones. The foil packages and burnt spoons stay behind. The pool cue in the corner that once kissed your empty head stays in his court. You've got to move more quickly now. Don't court disaster's clock. Grab your sanity and go. You're very young, I know, and that's your cue. You've got a life to live. It's his own fault if someday he should overdose and foil his last chance at staying clean. You pack. You go. Take your child and your dogs. They'll take their cue from you so please don't cry. Leave the foil to be dealt with by the court. Pack this conviction with the bottles and the bones. It's not your fault. [This message has been edited by Laura Heidy-Halberstein (edited April 17, 2008).] |
Fascinating, Laura. It's unclear to me whether this is something you wrote in '74 or just now wrote. Either way, I do hope you had fun writing it.
I thought sestinas were supposed to be in IP - but I'm no expert. If others want to do this exercise but would like to avoid the fretful, frightful, fraying fringes, feel free to send me yours in PM. Anne |
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Take care - Anne |
Hi Anne,
This seemed like a fun drill so I thought I'd join in. It isn't my first sestina, but I think it's one of the only ones I didn't write while drunk in a bar or at a party. Thanks for posting this. Hope you had as much fun as I did. I thought when you were gone my peace was made, But now your empty pillow mocks my joy. I picture you asleep, an earthly angel, Who only lacks the wings to bring him home. I would be willing to forgive all wrongs, If only I could trust you to be kind. The other day you smiled, you were so kind I thought that with you back, our peace was made, But then you blew me off, revived dead wrongs, And resurrected sorrow to kill joy. So now, though I am drawn, I can’t go home To him who one time seemed to be an angel. Perhaps, although unkind, you are an angel, But I’d prefer a man, if he were kind. For years you reassured me you’d come home, But still you strayed. And what home can be made Out of an empty house, built without joy And with a cornerstone made up of wrongs? Let us forgive the past, forget all wrongs. Let us be true. I’ll guard you like an angel Guards sleeping children, and fills their dreams with joy So they may dream of peace. Let us be kind And let us claim a future newly made To stand forever as an earthly home. But still you stay away. Forget the home, Forget the dreams we had. Remember wrongs. Remember in the solitude you made That love is difficult. I’m not an angel And I can’t save you, though I would be kind. So let us stay alone and forget joy. Why does your voice still fill me with such joy? Why, when I hear it, do I feel at home? Leave me alone, if you wish to be kind. ‘Cos running hot and cold adds to the wrongs. But still, though you are cruel, you are my angel And so I’ll say to you whose absence made All of the joy we felt transform to wrongs. But if I could go home and find my angel Pretending to be kind, my peace were made. |
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